Okay bear with me, I’m about to go full Grammar Nazi. Top left panel: “I really can’t convince you to come with me, is there?” Might I suggest the “is there?” be changed to “can I?” or something similar so the sentence flows better? /Done Grammar Nazi’ing/
Damn Gael’s really pulling his weight this chapter! Also didn’t realize till now that Yalin had a duck bill, cute!
SO they where in love. well, I hope the come back together again one day. with that said it’s going to take something extremely distasteful to convenes her to leave her commander.
Okay bear with me, I’m about to go full Grammar Nazi. Top left panel: “I really can’t convince you to come with me, is there?” Might I suggest the “is there?” be changed to “can I?” or something similar so the sentence flows better? /Done Grammar Nazi’ing/
Damn Gael’s really pulling his weight this chapter! Also didn’t realize till now that Yalin had a duck bill, cute!
SO they where in love. well, I hope the come back together again one day. with that said it’s going to take something extremely distasteful to convenes her to leave her commander.
@Feh
Oh, thanks for the pointer! I somehow overlooked that when finalizing this page’s dialogue.
It’s time for Amara and her companions to learn how to fly with Gael. Or at least enjoy the view from above ♥
What are you up to over there, primma….?
Happy new year guys, have a nice holidays lots of power and strength.
Happy New Year.
This is my favorite webcomic.