Hi there! I prefer not to write the characters’s thoughts via text. Instead, I attempt to convey them through their dialogue, body language and actions. That’s why you won’t see any “thought balloons” in Windborn. It’s simply how I approach storytelling!
It’s interesting how much Amara wants to know about that word. I was surprised that she thought Tevor knew about it, and even more that he recognizes it. (P.S. To felix-leg, I don’t think it’s illegal for a nipple-less bird to show her breasts to a chick…unless her mark is despised.)
Isn’t showing your breast, err, prosternum to children illegal? ;P
btw: I wonder, this style of word ballons is interesting, but what if you wanted to show what somebird is *thinking* instead of saying?
Hi there! I prefer not to write the characters’s thoughts via text. Instead, I attempt to convey them through their dialogue, body language and actions. That’s why you won’t see any “thought balloons” in Windborn. It’s simply how I approach storytelling!
It’s interesting how much Amara wants to know about that word. I was surprised that she thought Tevor knew about it, and even more that he recognizes it. (P.S. To felix-leg, I don’t think it’s illegal for a nipple-less bird to show her breasts to a chick…unless her mark is despised.)